Thank you! I see what you mean, I really get the 3rd person mixed up a lot of times. Regarding paragraph breaks I tend to have trouble with them (it's easier in pieces with more movement but here I really had no idea where it would be appropriate to break). Thank you again! I'll do my best to work on this next time! :)
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Date: 2018-12-06 05:58 am (UTC)Thank you again! I'll do my best to work on this next time! :)